All Comments on 'Holiday Inn Humiliation'

Good start!

More coming. Still learning to navigate this site!

Not bad, I absolutely adore stories with male leads getting naked and embarrassed in public settings. I am hoping he gets seen by more people.

> "And that was that. There I stood, completely naked, in a public setting, completely naked with plenty of people around and me, and I was completely naked."

...What?

Yeah, I was going for repetition as emphasis, but an errant “and” makes the whole thing sorta unintelligible. Oops.

Hey, no worries, ODN. I have a mild reading disability, so part of it was my fault. Sentences like that can read like gibberish due to my brain not working right, so it's not your fault. Don't worry!