All Comments on 'Holiday Job Pt. 02'

I thought you needed an editor for this tale due to the typos. One does not gobble down a "desert"; rather it is a "dessert". "Though" should have been "thought". "Hoodini" should have been "Houdini". I also did not care for how the tour guide was able to get into the locked villa without explanation or the mental hold she has over the wife, who seems to still have a bit of reluctance over what is happening to her. Perhaps you could have also developed the idea of the husband going to the authorities or at least the owners of the resort to stop the insanity, or explained why he did not do so. I continue to enjoy the theme of the otherwise faithful wife going into a sexual frenzy with the husband being left in the dark, but I could only give you 4 stars because this chapter seemed rushed and poorly edited. Cheers!

So the Husband seems continuously "Confused" and NOT sure "What to do?". He obviously is really happy that his formerly "faithful" wife is now a full fledge "prostitute" maybe finding it exciting that she is fucking dozens of men every day. LOL, what a fool of a husband or a man. If he thinks he is going to have a much more sexy wife he is kidding himself. She can't be trusted, She will NEVER be his wife again, she will ALWAYS be a full fledge whore now and forever. He is so "turned on" about his whore wife fucking other men, he is crazy. Constantly confused. LOL he has completely lost her love, her heart and her body. The whore is owned by these crooks and there is nothing he can do except go home and get a divorce by himself. She will Never come home or be his again. 5 stars for describing a delusional hubby losing his wife to the Mob. Buster2U

Let's say Hubby has been frustrated that his wife isn't a very good lover and he had a secret fantasy of his wife becoming a whore, so that she would learn how to fuck better. Let's say she did learn how to fuck better, so much so that she is always ready for sex, now and in the future. So, even if she went home with Hubby, he hasn't gotten any sexual relief from his wife the whole vacation. What makes him think that he would get some when they get home? The whore wife would much rather fuck a hundred strangers than ever give her hubby a pity fuck. He is SOL regardless of what he is thinking. I just don't see the wife, who now loves being a whore, ever going back home to the boring life she had before. Even if she does, Hubby still won't get any pussy, and she will be her cheating, lying whore self forever after. Getting as much strange dick as she can get. Probably for money. But Hubby will still be left out in the cold. Go home NOW, divorce the slut, sell the house, and disappear, you have lost her heart, her soul, her love, and her body. She doesn't love you, or she wouldn't be selling her pussy to every man in Algiers that she can sell her pussy to. She doesn't love you or she wouldn't be listening to that little slut Mara. She doesn't love you and will never be faithful to you, even if she did try to come home to you. She is lost forever. Sorry Dude. Turning your wife into a whore, wasn't a good move. Thanks, Buster2U

what a wonderful vacation!

Very nice this is an awesome story!!

It's getting really spicy 🥵 loving it

This is another story on the same theme: Forty something Emily and Chris go somewhere and she is captivated by people who induce her to have sex with many men. She loves it and wants to become their whore and sex slave. At this point Chris, who is always “confused,” is just a helpless, useless, and importantly, a very willing spectator while Emily is being fucked over and over by unknown men. He wants to support her new experiences. Of course the sex is all unprotected, but she does not seem to care if she becomes pregnant or contracts STDs or HIV. She is so consumed by her need to be controlled and fucked that her world no longer includes Chris and more importantly, any sense of her own self control. Emily quickly assumes a new identity as whore and sex slave and just goes further and further without restraint, which is, I gather, the author’ intention. There are never consequences, just endless sex and orgasms for Emily under the control of her new masters. Whatever the end point will be, it is not shared with the readers. These stories are incredibly erotic, but at the same time very dark and indeed, very depressing. The incredible highs from sex - or drugs - is apparently all that matters to Emily now. Her seemingly rational comments to Chris toward the end of this chapter mean nothing. She is now in her own world and is a whore; Chris is just someone she knows. For his part, Chris is completely unwilling to intervene. For him, Emily is no longer an individual whom he loves and wants to protect, but has become just an object of great fascination for, and he has no intention of changing the course of events. Again, the author has created a new world, one with no sexual conventions, limits, or restraints. Unfortunately, it is also a very one-dimensional world which strains credulity. His characters quickly become just cardboard cutouts and he leaves it to the reader to imagine the outcome for them.

Great story brother only one suggestion in your next update let the husband stumble upon an porn video of emily getting gangbanged by hundreds of cocks and realising the fact that his wife was now beyond saving with her becoming an out and out nymphomaniac

will being a prostitute become her day job? how many clients will she take each day?

Outstanding fun 5 Star entertainment for this adventurous couple. Rock them on. Cheers

great story, keep it coming. maybe have Emily extend her holiday for the indefinite future.

Not for me! Husband needs to grow a pair

Hot and erotic while depressing at the same time. NaturalHammer really knows how to catch his readers. Emily is experiencing a new side of hers, very slowly having Chris take a look inside. Chris is torn between dread and exitement with exitement slowly overcoming. Emily should tear the last walls down having bareback sex from now on, and take drugs maybe being forced to. Speedballs of heroine and cocaine or crystal meth in a syringe to shoot her up fast then snort or smoke more cocaine or meth to make her horny and willingless all night. That would confront her with her inner self, is she really a whore or not. Even Chris should have some coke to find out what he really wants. In the end, this could make them both stronger and bring them closer together (Personal experience)

Excellent continuation of the first part! Love to see a wife fall into this lifestyle so fully and freely. I hope her evolution will continue in soon to follow parts!

Okay, I ALWAYS try and be as positive as I can when I comment…so here goes. So far…I am giving you five stars on parts 1 and 2…but only for the plot. My friend you NEED to have a competent proofreader. There’s way too many spelling and grammar errors that are, imo detracting from your GREAT story.

And this Chris guy…I just want to just punch his fucking lights out!! Yes, I realize his being a cuck is important, but dang…just one punch to his goddamn nose, and then I’ll be happy!!

Okay, carry on ☀️

I am very pleased to read in two places that there will be some pregnancy risk sex and breeding in Emily's future. As it should be to give her Male customers the full erotic thrill of using a hole for rent. Please continue with this in each posting, and make it more front and center. Also a bit more from Emily on this very special female privilege.

I noticed you started this theme very briefly in "Becoming a Whore" and then dropped it - you never last us know if she ever became pregnant or not. This should be in every posting as babymaking is what sex is finally about.

I also think it would be better, a great improvement, to have Emily be much more open with here beloved hubby about her newly found whore side, what she is doing, why it is so hot for her, and why she can still love him but want the thrill of the naughty and forbidden (especially the forbidden babymaking out of wedlock).

Couldn't stop reading. I hope you finish her journey and let us know how you want it to go. Please finish her journey. Great story

Hope Emily continues her new profession when the holiday is over. She should look for business at the asylum hotels, or pick them up straight off the dinghies

Enjoyed this story, eagerly waiting for the next installment

Please finish her journey. How does it continue. Need to read more. Thank you

I wonder if he will loose her and go home to England alone after re vacation...

Excellent story, despite a few grammar missteps. I was so turned on reading the story, I am sure the author had to be just as excited writing about Emily and Chris. I envy Chris - he is so fortunate to have Mada bring both he and Emily along. I am dying to read what comes next... People should stop slamming Mada. Chris and Emily are clearly a submissive couple. Mada is clearly Emily's Madame but she is not some evil witch. She is giving Emily and Chris what they both want - Emily much quicker than Chris - and Mada is bringing them both along in a very sensitive and respectful way at their own different pace. I would so much love if my wife and I had found a Mada in our lives.

PS to all of those anonymous slammers - it's a story, and a great one.

You are the master of this kind of story! Please write more.

Great story, as always! Dying to read the rest ;)

I can't wait to read how you make Emily fare at 'the market'. And, what about the 'MAYBE MORE' comment? Will she find herself 'owned', by some Algerian gang back home; or will she embrace her new-found profession, if not how will she scratch the itch? 5 stars.

Hubby definitely needs to mention if his beloved wife is using any birth control. Of course, for the full whore experience she should be totally unprotected and taking it raw. Especially if it is her fertile time of the month!

Mada also needs to be spermed and risk a baby along with Emily so hubby also gets a chance to create a baby, even if it is not in his very own wife.

Keep up the good work. I see you are not getting any real naysayers so far which means all find this to be really hot!!!!!

When Chris gets a massage it should be a full unprotected at-risk fucking instead of a lousy hand job. He deserves it for what is happening to his formerly shy spouse.

Holy shit! Unbelievably hot story. I'm glad a found it a few weeks late so I can binge-read. We all know where it's going but can't wait to read it.

I loved the second part of this story. I think I would have liked it more if Emily had talked a bit more to her husband - hearing from her what she had been doing and how she felt about it all. And BTW how did they get the cum of 5 guys into one condom ! Great story though - on to part3 now.

First and foremost, love your stories and your writing. I think, however, that you have a great chance to improve on all your stories by letting the reader see why Emily suddenly takes the turn she takes. Many of your stories feel a bit like Emily falls victim to an unseen martian slut ray. In “Too boring” we get to experience what is driving Emily and it makes much more sense.

“She is natural, we only help."

Emily’s pimp, Mada, is right. Emily seems to be a happy whore, and looks forward to strutting on the beach distributing cards that advertise her more than ample wares as a prostitute. Will she continue with her new calling when they return home? Fabulous writing.