All Comments on 'Holiday Job Pt. 03'

Excellent

You should be ashamed for using up three chapters, as well as your readers important time in teasing us with this.

Either Emily is fucking other men, or she isn't. Now, it doesn't take much imagination to figure out what's happening, but I for one, just don't like how you're taking way too much time with this.

I'll sign out from here and leave this set of stories be. Good luck in the future, but you're just taking waaaaaaaayyyy too long with this one.

I'm loving the direction the story is going. And I love the pacing, watching this couple get in over their heads.....thrilling. Thank you for your work.

Nice

Another great chapter, bring on the next.

Well, I confess my time seems to be as not important as others. We love the way you catch us every time, Hammer, and suck us into the story. The way, you develop all characters from a new angle and have us take a photographic look at the scenery. Great job! Looking forward to part 4!

I love this. Please keep writing.

Damn that was really hot

Oh Chris! Oh Emily!

Enjoying the ride. Wondering when Chris is going to wise up?

Great as ever. Love your stories

Very good, but could anyone be as clueless as dear hubby?

Preg risk sex is just so dam hot! So Emily is about to become a real woman, risking a baby as is natural for females everywhere.

I am very pleased you are getting straight to the impregnation part. I especially hope to hear more Emily and less Chris. I lust to hear it directly from Em, how she feels about ALL her new found lifestyle. Let her let it all out on clueless Chris as he so deserves a very hard wake up call. He also deserves to impregnate a certain bitch who corrupted his dear (now hot) wife.

An excellent continuation of a great story! This is one of my favorites for sure! I love how Chris' fears, angst, and excitement are all depicted in a perfect and realistic balance that is exactly what I would experience in this situation.

AND THEN HE SHOT HER IN THE HEAD. THE END.

Really enjoying this one, hope you’re working on part 4…

Great story, hope next part will come soon.

Great story, love the way it’s tantalising expanding.

Part four soon, please.

Like it, is she going home? Don't think so, they'll keep her.

What a great story !