All Comments on 'Homecoming Surprise'

What an awful crock of crap !!

WTF is this shi*

Atrocious! No warning of lesbian sex!

Another fucking wimp cuck story

Worst story EVER... Should have been categorized as BDSM / fetish. This is definitely NOT a Loving Wife story. I would NEVER knowingly read this kind of sick bullshit.

Yuk!

Time to fuck up there fun Drug the wife and tattoo her everywhere with things like Cock here Fuck my tits Whip this ass and just generally cover her body with body art that a lesbian would hate Then do the same to the lesbian

This is a lesbian fantasy and actions of a dumb mindless wife.

Dreadful!!

Well, if your objective was to write one of the biggest piles of shit seen on the site, you've done well. Congratulations. Just garbage. Perhaps writing in Loving Wives is not your forte.

Boy put your shit in the IR category where sick fucks like you belong. 1☆

Nope, this rambling crap is totally stupid.

Now I can say that I've read a story written by a transgender fuck toy wannabe. It definitely was not on my bucket list!

WTF? That was truly a waste of time.

Wrong category. You would have scored much higher in Lesbian or Fetish.

I would have asked my wife where I could find Georgia went and beat the shit out of her until her own mother won't recognize her and told to stay out of my wife's life or the next I see her will be her last.

WTFO. I would have grabbed my browning high power and six spare mags. Suited up tactical and paid madame enslaver a visit. What kind of stupid cow did this clown marry? Oh well poor Georgia...Death comes expectedly.

You don't tug on Supermans cape. You don't spit into the wind. You don't pull the mask off the old Lone Ranger and ya don't enslave my wife bitch.

Correct category must be „Idiots and dumb wives“.

Another 1st person story where the 1st person narrator is as detached as a 3rd person one. He's just --- there. He just goes along with things with little or no anger and accepts the changes just, well, because. Hey, why go to the effort to write a reason for him to act this way, just have him act that way.

SUCKED BIG TIME .......COULDN'T EVEN GET A RISE....I AM DISAPPOINTED THAT I CANNOT GIVE IT A LOWER SCORE

Yikes, some authors are very confused.

What the hell was that

What the hell was that about

This is no one’s idea of good erotic writing, no one fantasies about a situation like this. Well maybe a woman that hates men.

Please do the entire civilized world a favor and find another hobby! Here is how this piece of shit story should have gone.... Once hubby found out where skank slut Georgia lived he abducted her. He took her to a secluded spot and beat the shit out of her. Then he sold her to a Mexican cartel that owned whore houses in Tijuana. For good measure he threw his idiot cheating slut wife in the mix too. Neither of these two bitches were ever heard from again. Neither made it back to the states as the STD's got both of them within a couple years. Nobody gave a flying fuck when they disappeared.

A complete crock of shit.

I have read over 2000 stories on loving wives and this is the worst (jaybee186)

Wrong category.

Fetish is that way.

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Wow! That was just dumb!

BDSM = No-Go

Might be a 5 in the right catagory, but a 2 in LW

What a CROCK OF SHIT.

Would be interesting to see a progression of total ownership. More piercing, some body modification, ear pointing, canine implants, animal contact lenses, more pet like.

Well, let’s consider this…

Slavery. Check.

Cuckoldry. Check.

Martian slut ray. Aura, rather. Check.

Brain-dead wife. Check.

Moron husband. Check.

Domineering boss/friend/influencer. Check.

Author putting this in the wrong category. Check.

Redemption. Fail.

Husband excited by hotwife. Check.

Likeable characters. Fail.

Mind-control. Check.

Burn the Bitch. Fail.

Burn the Bastard. Semi, he’s too stupid to deal with the situation.

Lying wife. Check.

Cock cage. Fail.

Behind the scenes villain. Check.

Predictable disaster only the detached-from-reality would think is erotic? In progress.

Author pandering to a tiny subset of a niche? Check.

Gym lesbians. Check.

Violence. Fail.

Unsafe use of sex toys. Check.

Sexually Transmitted Diseases. Pending.

Politics. Fail.

Children used as bargaining chips. Fail.

“It’s just sex. I love you.” cliche. Check.

Implied Bull is more important than the husband. Check.

Little blue dress. Fail.

Bar pickup by football player in front of husband. Fail.

“I’m doing this” after leaving note. Fail.

Yeah.

Meh.

2 people who deserve a "Fargo" finish. 3, counting the author, BRRRRRRRRRRRRRR FSH.