All Comments on 'Honey Scores with The New Signing'

This was great till the end I’m hoping for a part 2 and she ends up being pregnant otherwise this is a complete waste of writing you started off great and the story flows brilliantly then it’s like you got fed up of the story so please I’m hoping for a part 2 so it will make part 1 perfect

This is hot. She’ll be hooked on bbc forever now. Once a women experiences a bigger cock & realizing what effects it has on her, she can’t stay away from them. This story could use a few more chapters on how she evolves into a married slut always begging for black dick & maybe even being shared amongst the brothers. Maybe even getting knocked up with a black baby.

Two stories, no followers. Are you getting the hint?

Damn hot.

Too short, though.

Just two stories so I hope you are learning to expand your skills; your writing is not descriptive and lacks a smooth flow...

my wife is a trainer for a midwestern HBC. Lets just say that she has had her fill many, many times over of these young black athletes.

Ended too abruptly. Use dialogue to greater effect and you’ll have a consistent set of followers and high ratings.

Why do authors always have black men calling white women derogatory names? It's not erotic in the slightest.