All Comments on 'Hong Kong Adventures Ch. 01'

Like your story very much, but especially enjoy the way you tell it. I feel as though I am listening in on a conversation rather then reading. Brought back my own memories of a porn theater - thanks

Still, I commend you for trying to maintain the story arc, introducing elements from previous adventures. Plus, you used "bum" rather than "ass", your previous use of the latter seeming rather incongruous.

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Better still, you're writing again: well done. I've actually pulled my own stories from this site for some heavy re-writing (mostly talking several chapters and joining them together). When they're back up, I'd welcome your feedback.

Have you read Emmanuelle Arsan's novels, and do you consider the Malaysian stories in any way influenced by them? This one in particular has an 'Arsan air' to it.