by EmilyMiller
You managed to make an out and out stroke story still somehow human - maybe that’s not what you were going for, but perhaps you just can’t help yourself. PK
@PeterKimi - thanks, hun. Yes you are probably right. To borrow a phrase from your compatriots, this seems to be a Marmite story. TBH I was expecting that. I wasn’t looking to win a popularity contest. Em
As usual, whatever you write leaves us (men especially) aching to be with you. You have a wonderful way with words to paint your story.
Gonna be honest: the whole BDSM thing is very alien to me. Never been with anyone into anything rougher than some light spanking.
Still; I found your story rather...arousing. In a dark way. Which I suppose was the point.
Fantasies can take us to some strange places; I'll admit to having my own "dark" fantasies but they'll remain strictly that: FANTASIES, nothing I'd ever do IRL.
Took me to a strange place, so...thanks? Lol
@Djmac1031 - it was / is a fantasy. I’ve done all of the constituent parts (spider gags, blindfolds [though not a hood like I describe], face-fucking, gang bangs), but never the overall combination. Em
Intense, dark, erotic, and so descriptive. Like djmac, the whole bdsm thing is beyond me, but I have to admit, you have me curious about the power and appeal of compete surrender...
In the darkness, even your greatest fear, with trust, can become light...
Thank you for sharing a small piece of yourself.
Great story !! Emily you certainly have a play on words !! Good job and I look forward to reading more of your work !!
Everything is so descriptive. The way you portray the dynamics is so well done and how you bring everything together. Really well done, thanks for writing.
@JJ82490 - thank you 😊. We all have our inner darkness. This is a story from mine. Emily
I love this dark side of BDSM and would have loved to have been in your place hanging from the chains while your body was abused.
I think you did a great job of conveying realism and truth in the story. I have to admit the guys peeing in your mouth was a turn off, but it's your story, lol. :) It would have been good to get into her mind a little more, if she could have fantasized and expressed her thoughts, we could have enjoyed that with her. It seems like it's just one thing after another, but I guess that's the whole point, she is being used. Very interesting, educational, and again realistic, at least in a fictional sense, if that makes sense. Thanks for sharing your dark fantasies with us, if you have more, I'd love to see them.