All Comments on 'Hootie 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

"as I flattered my huge eyes" are you self flattering your hotties eyes OR distribution you mean to use fluttered ? As in repeatedly batting your eyes ?

"Skippy had never known be known to . . ." Extra word?

In all my years I thought the expression was 'Battery Shit Crazy.'

Good offering, you are getting quite proficient at the intro to a story.

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