All Comments on 'Hope in the Hotel'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is a lovely romance story, but the ending is much too abrupt, and the build-up too brief. The love scene is well-written, but like the introduction it is much too brief. Even so, this is a very good story, and should be continued.

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