All Comments on 'Horny Grandmother'

Such a caring lady who in the process of giving a special gift also got pleasure. Showing the path to be a good lover is a lifetime bestowment.

Lovely story,,,maybe a follow up to it would be great.........

Damn, made me stroke!

Frankly, a good first story. A few minor suggestions.

The sentence reads: I was shocked, to say the least but all she said was I'm glad to see you're a normal boy after all.

Consider quotation marks so it reads: I was shocked, to say the least but all she said was, "I'm glad to see you're a normal boy after all".

The sentences read: After sucking it more to lube it up than get me off again. She mounted me guiding my cock inside her and she rode me hard.

Consider merging them and deleting some words as the first sentence seems like a fragment: After sucking it for awhile, she mounted me. Grandma guided my cock inside her and rode me hard.

The sentence reads: Grace enjoyed it too as she moaned quite a bit louder with me filling her butt with my cock.

Consider changing it to simply read: Grace enjoyed it too as she moaned quite a bit.

Please understand I am not trying to put you down. Heaven knows it takes courage to post a story and brave the responses. I like what you shared on your biography. I hope you submit more stories.

Fun tale screaming for Proof Reading and Editing, which is why I could not rate it more highly.

BTW, my Step Grand Mother asked me to go to Florida with her and my Grandfather; she had "lots of friends that would appreciate me, and take care of mean many ways."