All Comments on 'Hot of Darkness Pt. 02'

by SuperficialSaul

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TLMorganTLMorganover 2 years ago

Great second installment. I'm assuming one of these guys will get lucky to fuck her next!

SuperficialSaulSuperficialSaulover 2 years agoAuthor

I plan on finishing this story in the next installment. I'm just busy with school at the moment. Sorry.

mitchawamitchawaover 2 years ago

This story is o comic book quality. This is not a serious piece of work but is a dismal attempt to be erotic. If it's not believable, it's not worth reading. Try another genre.

SuperficialSaulSuperficialSaulabout 2 years agoAuthor

@mitchawa

Thank you for your input! I'm sorry I didn't reach your arbitrary threshold for realism or enjoyment. Perhaps I too should list my academic accomplishments and qualifications in the profile description to garner some sense of superiority x)

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