All Comments on 'Hotel Room Surprise'

not into sph, but otherwise good story

Your tags are enough to automatically give 1☆ cum eating is fetish and your story belongs in the fetish category.

Anonymous37 minutes ago

Your tags are enough to automatically give 1☆ cum eating is fetish and your story belongs in the fetish category.

I know Loving Wives is full of people who can't cope with anything other than monogamous relationships that are missionary position but this is crazy. Cum eating is a kink but it's barely described in the story.

Hot tape. Loved it

Brave for the author to write into the Loving Wives category. They're mad here. Great story.

☆☆☆☆☆ - I hope there is a Chapter Two where he visits Lisa

Wrong category. 1*

I wish my wife did this to me!

Just dogs meeting in an alley, sticking their noses in each other's assholes, then fucking. Great literature. You think porn is supposed to be trash. Yours is.

Two hillwalkers in Cambridge?

"Anonymous: Wrong category. 1*"

"Anonymous: Your tags are enough to automatically give 1☆ cum eating is fetish and your story belongs in the fetish category."

Incorrect. Loving Wives is described by Literotica as "Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more." My tale was of a wife who was shared (motivated by a creampie kink) and who had extra-marital fun. It fits in this category.

It's a shame that certain people score negatively, not on the strength of the writing or the creativeness of the tale, but because they have moral or kink objections that are clearly signposted. Heard of YKINMK?!

northstanderrhino: Two hillwalkers in Cambridge?

Very unambitious hillwalkers?

An excellent point, sir!

@bawdybloke - Sorry, but before you lecture others on the words used by Literotica, you should pull your head out of your ass, wipe the shit out of your eyes, and read the words below each numerical rating. Now, if you are actually smarter than a 5th grader and just hiding it, you'll see that under the number 1, it says "HATE IT". It does not say "HORRIBLY WRITTEN". So, despite your whining about how unfair it is that people who hate the crap you write rate it a 1, that's just you being stupid.

-

Now, as to what belongs in this category. Yes, the vague wording on the category can be considered to cover your story. However, reality just bitch slapped you in the face for not doing your due diligence. Your takeaway should be, "I didn't know my readers like I should have," rather than this pathetic diatribe of stupidity...

-

First, you should look beyond the mere words used and ask yourself, "What is the significance of specifying wife?" The answer is that this category is about the marital drama that you don't get in a girlfriend story OR a willing fetish lifestyle story. Those stories are about the fetish sex and lack that impact that defines this category in practice. BTB and true reconciliations belong here because the story is about the marital drama and the resolution of it. RAAC kind of fits, but the lack of actual resolution of the drama causes it to fit better in the Fetish category with the willing cuckold tales.

-

Second, anybody who has paid any attention to comments knows that a story like the one you posted will get better comments and ratings in Fetish than in Loving Wives. So, one must ask, why would a writer put the time and effort into writing a story and then post it where it will get the worse response? Sadly, the only two answers are that they are an idiot or they are a troll. So, have a little respect for the story you wrote (assuming you actually wrote it) and put it where it will be best received which, in this case, is the Fetish category.

-

In other words, KNOW YOUR AUDIENCE!

Anonymous3 days ago

@bawdybloke - Sorry, but before you lecture others on the words used by Literotica, you should pull your head out of your ass, wipe the shit out of your eyes, and read the words below each numerical rating. Now, if you are actually smarter than a 5th grader and just hiding it, you'll see that under the number 1, it says "HATE IT". It does not say "HORRIBLY WRITTEN". So, despite your whining about how unfair it is that people who hate the crap you write rate it a 1, that's just you being stupid.

-

Now, as to what belongs in this category. Yes, the vague wording on the category can be considered to cover your story. However, reality just bitch slapped you in the face for not doing your due diligence. Your takeaway should be, "I didn't know my readers like I should have," rather than this pathetic diatribe of stupidity...

-

First, you should look beyond the mere words used and ask yourself, "What is the significance of specifying wife?" The answer is that this category is about the marital drama that you don't get in a girlfriend story OR a willing fetish lifestyle story. Those stories are about the fetish sex and lack that impact that defines this category in practice. BTB and true reconciliations belong here because the story is about the marital drama and the resolution of it. RAAC kind of fits, but the lack of actual resolution of the drama causes it to fit better in the Fetish category with the willing cuckold tales.

-

Second, anybody who has paid any attention to comments knows that a story like the one you posted will get better comments and ratings in Fetish than in Loving Wives. So, one must ask, why would a writer put the time and effort into writing a story and then post it where it will get the worse response? Sadly, the only two answers are that they are an idiot or they are a troll. So, have a little respect for the story you wrote (assuming you actually wrote it) and put it where it will be best received which, in this case, is the Fetish category.

LOL. It's a well written hot story. We need lots more of these on Literotica like this. And "KNOW YOUR AUDIENCE" troll. It's 4.1, so many more like that than agree with incel trolls like you. Go for it, lets have more like this.

Loved it.

-

Ignore the trolls. They are just mindl;ess cucks who don't know their arse from a good thing.

Staying in character with the story, despite the other people giving you shit, I think if I was the guy I would’ve got permission from the husband before the wife slept overnight in your bed. The husband may have his kink, but they are still married as a couple.

Bawdybloke wrote a real joke.