All Comments on 'Hotwife in the Hills Pt. 04'

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Bham487Bham4874 months ago

Hopefully it ends like the other story with him all alone and sad.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I know this is fiction, but I don’t like the disrespect, just my point of view though. A couple of grammatical errors that a good proof read might have caught, but I’m not an English teacher either.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

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I am a novice writer who is experimenting with some true stories from my life and some fantasies of what I would love to experience.

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