All Comments on 'Hotwife Poker Night Pt. 01'

by ChrisAnderson

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lucy_sometimeslucy_sometimesabout 1 month ago

Familiar idea. Has potential, but I think you should have taken the story a little further. Perhaps ask readers what they would like to see written on the chip. 4 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

What story? Piece of junk.

Tica21Tica21about 1 month ago

To short to build both the story and the anticipation of the reader. But ready to see what you do with the next chapter.

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Former Marine, now part of a nuclear family. Sharing stories from a first person view.