All Comments on 'Hotwife Poker Night Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Awesome. I’d like to attend your poker game. And I’d like to have one of my own.

Tica21Tica21about 1 month ago

Big improvement. You've got something going in this story.

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctorabout 1 month ago

A LITTLE better, still way to short. You should still consider painting a picture, not just tell us whats going on. Show, dont tell. An improvement overall though.

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