All Comments on 'Household Correction'

Just get a divorce. She doesn’t want a husband, she wants a slave. And hypnotic tits? Seriously?

You write how she feels her husband doesn’t listen to her; but judging by her treatment of him, she is no better.

un bon debut

fun but a little simplistic. Like the premise though, build on it!

Hey Whackdoodle, you're reading Mind Control erotica. Were you expecting the main character to be a decent human being who respects the thoughts and opinions of their S.O? Or were you expecting mind control?

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Who reads mind control erotica, and then gets upset when minds get controlled? I honestly don't understand that mindset.

This story was fine.

Good One

I have never laughed so hard. It was good. Oh the Twilite Zone between the space and imagination.

Make the husband have sex with a man.

To mediocreauthor, don't hold your breath hoping whacker says anything good about any of the stories. He's a loser and obviously gets his kicks off trying to put down others' writing, but at the same time seems to be too damn stupid to write anything himself. He's a chump!

Well, it was nice for me but I wanted some wholesome mind control like in Emily's pocket or feminine allure or even taming the boss too . This was nothing like that but still it was great for me on fan service scenes so yeah 3.6/5 or 3/5

Well, I rated it 4/5 now. Can you tell me whether you got the name of the story that inspired you

I would like to see this continue and see where it goes. You set up the scene and backstory so you should have run with it.