by Thors_Fist
My DEAR AUTHOR, you continue to amaze me. How do you come up with this sexy stuff ? Trust me, I know that you do not take your writing too seriously. You are having too good of a time ! And to me, it shows !
And, as a reader, I am benefiting. This chapter was especially clever. The addition of ARIEL will make up for LAURA leaving. Again, as the chapter ends, I am left with the SUSPENSE of wondering what will happen next !
Excellent job, EDITOR ! 5 stars, of course !