All Comments on 'How I Created a Monster Ch. 04'

This guy started something he'll eventually regret! Too Bad!

You, on the other hand write well, good flow, definition of character and events, very vivid...keep up on the writing.

Chapter 5 (?)...he started something, we - your readers - can figure it out.

Don't be a stranger.

I am so glad I don't. Just another Whorror story. And just like 99.9% of such stories the little cuckold wimp husband enjoys having a wife as a whore. Not a good fantasy to have.

you write very well - I'm really getting off on your descriptions of what Sam is doing

I find the husbands actions unbelivable, but there are too many of these stories not to believe some guys want this, or at least think they do. I have spent a lot of time in Savannah but all the single guys I met were gay, but either way don't see this working out well at all.

I have put chapters 5 & 6 (the conclusion) into the pipeline and they should be coming through in the next few days. So far the reviews are mixed, leaning towards bad. Let's see how the rest go. If people don't like my stuff, let's not dump it on them anymore. As to the believability of the characters, well, don't read this as a news article, treat it more as an amusing short story, or a fairy tale if that works for you. It's more Andy Capp than Antigone.

All the people posting negative comments on your story continue to read anyway. I think they get off on It privately, but have to bash it publicly. Too bad they can't just enjoy or skip it. Keep up the story, its interesting and well written, oh yeah, and hot too.

They both are getting what they want. Nice story and crafted very well. Thanks for sharing.

Is using wife like a porno flick, this is about him, not her. Don't feel any love or warmth in their relationship, this won't make the marriage better, no matter how you try, sorry.

Another unsolvable riddle and an unreadable story.

Thanks for your writing.