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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Story

but you really need to get someone to edit it for you.

IrvingParkeIrvingParkeover 3 years ago

This gets better and better!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Sorry but what you really NEED to do is keep writing this story. I am obsessed with this story. You make it the right length for each chapter, you have excellent characters who interact perfectly, and the entire story is all encompassing with everything from hard to deal with problems to some of the easiest daily situations.

I cannot wait for more.

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