All Comments on 'HUBRIS'

Very Nice Story for you First but just to Short and we don’t know how she use the Bad Words. But you have to start somewhere. Come them Cuming.

Good story, but it needs help. Please find an editor who knows English well.

Part 2?? Please?

A well written beginning top a potentially interesting story series. An interesting dynamic between a young woman and older man.

A lot of room for exploring her discovery of submissive eroticism.

Well done!

Mr.B

I hope the firm has huge limits on its sexual abuse and harassment insurance policy - a month of this and the firm will end up paying ALL her expenses for college and graduate school

The guy’s divorce is going to be pricey- let’s hope his partners doen’t kick him out

Loved the story

WITTON

Nice little story, sounds like she owned him for sure.

Get an editor! I couldn't get past the first 10 paragraphs! You need to introduce the characters to people who haven't been in your head while you were thinking up the storyline. Who is Vera? or Kit? Which one is Mr. Ferral's daughter? Is he the boss?

What a mess, clean it up.

five for a first time story. a bit of editing would really make it shine though.

keep up the good work, girl

Don't worry about the story being too short. A lot of us kept our first one short too just so we could practice using the site before spending time writing longer ones.

Very good first story. Love that it is from your view point. Keep up the good work.