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mitchawa12 months agoNot bad but it was not clear what the point of the story was. Was she attempting to become an artist or becoming a young lady showing off her assets on the internet? Fairly well written except for the lack of clarity.
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BHstories@BHstoriesJust posting some short stories I have in other places here. They are meant to be brief since my schedule doesn't always permit time to write though I might write longer ones someday. I know my stories are niche taste (BE, bimbo) and not for all. I enjoy feedback of all sorts....
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