- NonConsent/Reluctance
- Husband Watching Wife Taken Pt. 09 - Epilogue
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Epilogue
The next series to continue this story will be "Husband Helping Wife, and Friends". It will talk more about the past of Melody, Jules, and Sarah, as their individual pasts were paramount to this story, and how they reacted. It also will embrace those past experiences and use them to make their new joint futures. Jake, well let's admit it, tried to be the good husband, but presented with the possibility of having three willing whores for himself, well the good guy doesn't win out. A whole new life awaits them both, along with first his friends and then more Men.
Writer's notes: I thank all whom have read this so far, as this my first attempt at literature. My experience is in writing music and lyrics, using few words to describe something felt or experienced. This requires more detail than what I've done in the past, and I'm trying to learn how to do it better.
Each of these characters do not exist, although each is an amalgamation of people I have known, and the actions are the same. Just because I witnessed each action performed by ten different people, doesn't mean one person couldn't enjoy them all. My life and lifestyle has allowed me to meet some remarkably sexual people, and they should be celebrated, if only in my story.
To those who gave me constructive remarks, I thank you more that I can say. To those "Anonymous" cowards that hide behind a keyboard, I know what you were doing with one hand while reading, before you sent me your fake outrage. If you do not like the story or content, don't read it. But just because some Men live lives you cannot, doesn't mean that these things and people are not out there.
- COMMENTS
mattenwabout 2 years agoYou'll notice I'm not hiding behind my keyboard.
You'll have to take my word for it that I'm using both hands to type--well, one isn't. It's holding my................coffee pot.
The disaster you created with your idiotic story is hard to describe. One thing is inexplicable to me. You write "how a real husband would react" but not once do you show the real reaction. Where are the police in your story? Why aren't the black rapists behind bars? Why didn't he file a lawsuit against the rapists? Where is the press and the TV? Or are you really so sick in your mind that you believe the reality is your deranged brain?
Rw43about 2 years agoYou'll notice I'm not hiding behind my keyboard.
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You'll have to take my word for it that I'm using both hands to type--well, one isn't. It's holding my................phone.
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You're right that Melody's exact age is irrelevant and unimportant. My point is that your creative process didn't make her a specific person, so her subsequent actions were not a reflection of the person she "is". They were actions you wanted to talk about, so you created a vague "about" kinda maybe person and forced whoever it was to do those actions.
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As you say, she is an amalgamation of multiple persons. But amalgamationally created persons can have 12 hands, 3 cocks and 3 pussies all at the same time. I'm sure you agree that, while that might make good porn, it's hardly erotic, because it's not realistic. And realism is important.
Somehow you need to choose which character is going to have which characteristics.
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And I appreciate (I think) the distinctions between being a lyricist and a writer. You specify the difference in the economy of words. I also think there is a distinction in who you're writing to. I may be wrong (obviously), but I think a lyricist wants his/her thoughts and feelings to be representative of what other people think or feel too, so there will be an audience (or market, for us capitalists) for the lyrics.
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A writer can have thicker skin, because the story only needs to be consumed one time.
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In short, songs get replayed. Stories rarely get reread. But both build your reputation for future literary creations.
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I'm not much into Dom. But I respond to some types of voyeurism, hence the "Husband Watches" pulled me in. Good luck with your future writing.
