All Comments on 'Hypno Project'

Let's see where this goes :-)

Interesting premise but too short. Shouldn’t have even bothered posting it without having more written.

Promising tho a little rushed.

As a professional hypnotist I see several technical errors, but it is an intriguing premise. I liked it generally.

The author said "sleep", and his subject did not fall back into a trance.

So you set this up that 'sleep' was the word to put him back under but you ended the story with ""Yeah, you're right. I´ll sleep too. Good night."' and nothing happened. You need some work on the mechanics of this story.

The way people will heavily criticize a FREE, fictional story is wild lol the hypnotism was simple and there are plenty of stories where a person will fake being under a trance. Will be interesting to see if Nick was pretending. After all, he is the one who gave Tommy the idea for his paper.