All Comments on 'Hypno-Submission Pt. 03'

I had been assuming Brenda was already under control when she showed the other girls the video, but I think I like this timeline better, where she sees it for the first time as them but succumbs faster.

Also I really like her nuanced relationship to her memories of the trance, where she wants to remember enough to enjoy knowing she's controlled but also wants to forget some details of exactly how.

I really enjoyed the story right up until the demonization of Cynthia. Bit of a tired trope for the black character to be the one who is framed as one who needs “extra taming”. As some sort of punishment? Why does the black character need to be punished from the get-go? ...could have been her other friend Katie without anything being lost from the story. Couldn’t really read the rest, but oh well. Bias slips into everything, sadly.

this chapter didnt get me 'drawn in' like the earlier ones but it was needed. thanks

So hot....

Love the idea of those triggers

I love this behind the scenes perspective!

After reading previous chapter this seems a little bit of repetitive in part of watching first video together. The plot line of friend who collaborate with master could have more suggestive scenes in 1. And 2. Chapters -the choose of Brenda being secretively nudging Kate will be more exiting in this 3. chapter as revelation of her natural submissivnes and origin of her experience with bdsm could bring closure of her behavior. Brands first chats with master seems ambivalent - the power dynamic seems off as if she was on top of him. Discriptions of orgasminlc acta's are well written as in previous chapters

Master Boratus writes a great story. Wish i was female so i could be his slave.

Soo good as always!