Hypno-Submission Pt. 11

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The good news was that she was in the same place before and after each gap. Either in front of her laptop or in bed. The bad news was that the girl with perfect recall didn't have perfect recall.

"Cynthia Eleanor Jensen!" Her mom yelled.

"Shit."

Three names is always bad.

Cynthia shut her laptop and headed downstairs.

I can't just be spontaneously trancing. Someone's fucking with me and I'm gonna find out who.

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Next: Cynthia

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Too short. -2 stars

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I love this story

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 3 years ago

this does get hard to follow sometimes, but still fun to read. keeping it simple helps the readers follow it and become more involved. as in placing themsevles in a characters position.

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervabout 3 years ago

I enjoyed this story! But one of the problems with writing is that it takes time, and I had forgotten who was who since the last time, particularly Cynthia. Perhaps a sentence to catch lug nuts like me up?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I love this story, I don't want the chapters being so short T_T

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