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astuffedshirt_pervabout 3 years agoI enjoyed this story! But one of the problems with writing is that it takes time, and I had forgotten who was who since the last time, particularly Cynthia. Perhaps a sentence to catch lug nuts like me up?
liz33ndabout 3 years agothis does get hard to follow sometimes, but still fun to read. keeping it simple helps the readers follow it and become more involved. as in placing themsevles in a characters position.
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