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All Comments on 'Hypnosis Cures What Ails Her Pt. 03'

by DominicVance

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 1 year ago

I'm giving the series five stars and a favorite point but I feel disappointed that this chapter ended when it did. It felt like you got the story worked up to a very hot point and then left the reader hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Cassie taking a year off? Maybe she not on birth control and wants daddy's baby?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I agree with Sex4lf57's comments...the author stopped short and should have continued this climatic scene in PART 3 and not leave us hanging or waiting for an anti-climatic Part 4

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Just as I feared, harem bullshit. even lower score this part.

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Been trying for a while to turn a passion into a career. Recently started writing short stories again and getting back into erotica.