Hypnosis, Women, and Power Pt. 01

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Guy with hypotonic power gets what he wants.
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Part 1 of the 5 part series

Updated 06/14/2023
Created 03/24/2023
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Takashi Kato an 18-year-old kid sits up in bed, a little disappointed. He had been dreaming of having incredible hypnotic powers, and it all seemed so real. He takes a few deep breaths and looks around, realizing he's back in his bedroom. He smiles to himself, knowing it was just a dream, but appreciating the sense of wonder it had given him. He gets up and starts his day, feeling a little more excited and energetic than usual.

Takashi has above-average height standing at 180 cm, with a lean, athletic build. He has an oval-shaped face, and his dark brown eyes are framed by black eyebrows. His black hair is cut short, and neatly styled, and has no facial hair.

Takashi took a quick shower before heading down for breakfast.

"Good morning Takashi-Kun" Ayaka greeted Takashi.

Ayaka Kato is Takashi's adopted mother. Takashi's parents died when Takashi was only 3 years old in a car accident but thankfully his parent's friends Ayaka Kato and Genji Kato (Ayaka's husband) took pity on the boy and adopted him.

Despite living with Ayaka for so long Takashi was always in awe of how beautiful Ayaka was. He was mesmerized by her. Her long, dark hair was pulled back in a tight bun, and her exotic features were accentuated by flawless makeup. She was wearing a tight-fitting red dress that seemed to hug her curves in all the right places. He could not take his eyes off her.

"Go..ood morning, Mom" Takashi replied awkwardly.

"I have made Miso soup as you requested, I am busy cleaning the dishes so go and serve yourself." Ayaka mentioned in her sweet voice.

He went to a nearby table and tried to focus on his task, but his gaze kept returning to Ayaka's back and her thick thighs. He felt his cheeks flush as he realized he was being too obvious. He quickly looked away and tried to focus on his task. It was no use. His gaze kept returning to the gorgeous figure of his adopted mother. He could not help it. He was drawn to her in a way he could not explain.

"Takashi once you are done eating go and wake up your sister. Sigh... that girl always gives me so much trouble if only she was as half disciplined as you are." Ayaka let out a sigh.

Takashi quickly finished eating worried he might get a boner if he kept staring at Ayaka and went upstairs to wake his older sister up.

*Knock knock*

"Aiko, Aiko wake up you are going to be late for school again."

Takashi didn't hear anything so he turned the doorknob and entered Aiko's room.

Aiko was sleeping topless in her bed, wearing nothing but a pair of panties. Her fair skin was illuminated by the sunlight shining in through the window. Her long, black hair is spread out around her, and her breasts are softly rising and falling with each breath. She looks peaceful and content in her sleep, unaware of her beauty or the attention she's receiving from anyone who might be watching.

Takashi's Pov:

My eyes can't help but wander over her perfect curves. Her exposed skin is so soft and inviting, and I can't help but feel a deep stirring in my chest. My heart races as I take in her beauty and I can't help but feel an overwhelming desire to touch her. Her chest rises and falls with each breath, and I can't help but imagine what it would feel like to run my hands over her body, to feel her warmth and her softness. I want to run my fingers through her hair, to feel her warmth next to mine. I am mesmerized and aroused by her presence, and I can't help but want to be with her.

"What the heck am I doing? This is wrong..."

I felt a stirring in my pants as my body responded to the stimulation in front of me. I can feel my manhood hardening beneath the fabric of my trousers. My heart raced in anticipation as the stiffness in my groin increased.

Then I saw something horrifying, Aiko slowly opened her eyes and yawned, stretching her arms above her head. Rubbed the sleep from her eyes. She looked around her room and saw me staring at her with a huge boner like a creep.

"Takashi?! What are you doing in here?!" She yelled and covered herself with her hands.

"Uh... I'm sorry. I didn't mean to come in here. I was just... I just... I'll leave now."

"No, wait. You can't just come in here and act as if nothing happened. We need to talk about this."

"I'm sorry. I don't know what came over me. It won't happen again, I promise."

"Takashi, this is not okay. What you did was wrong. We need to have a serious discussion about this. I always knew you were a pervert. Do you think I don't notice how you stare at me and mom?"

I didn't know what to say I was panicked. "Look I already said I am sorry, I don't know what else you want from me. Besides, it's your fault for sleeping naked so you should be the one to apologize." I said in a panic.

'Oh crap! Why did I say that she is going to kill me.' I realized what I just said and I started sweating.

Aiko's face went completely blank and I started to worry even more.

'Now that he mentioned that, he is kind of right. It is my fault for not locking my door and sleeping naked, maybe I should apologize.'

"I guess it is kind of my fault for sleeping topless, so I am sorry, and please forgive me for yelling at you without thinking." Aiko apologized.

'HUH?' I was completely shocked my bitch of a sister apologized to ME? What is going on here?

"It's... it's not a big deal. Make sure you don't mention this to anyone else." I muttered and bolted out of the room.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

easy there lads, no story is perfect. you can give criticism without being rude. I think the story has potential but idd like to read more first.

wannabe_authorwannabe_authorabout 1 year agoAuthor

For the cunt who commented on my story begging to be the editor, I just want to say, stop begging it. Also, can the cunt show me the spelling mistake he was talking about? The cunt wants the job so bad that he is straight-up lying, this is a fucking porn story I wrote for fun, if you want immersion go read Harry Potter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Echoing the previous comments, you need an editor. It's a massive immersion-breaker when you use the wrong word or misspell something.

"what do you guys even check on the stories?" My guy, you didn't even check your own.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The story has potential, but you could really use an editor.

The PoV switch was unnecessary. There was nothing in either part that couldn't have been told from the same perspective as the other part, so pick one and stick with it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You used the word “hypotonic” in your story description. It means low solute concentration.

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