All Comments on 'Hypnotism is easy?'

Thanks for all the tales. Sorry your leaving.

Thank you Texas.

When scores (stars) are looking good 4 & 5;s then within the first five someone gives a one star which knocks you down to 3 point something (as happened with this submission and many others) it is a bit dispiriting. I am not Shakespeare and people are entitled to their opinion but having spent hours writing the entry for someone to disparage it, probably without even reading it is disheartening.

Like the twist at the end.

Yes, very good ending twist. What happens if she cannot hypnotize Len?

Good fantasy story. A little wordy and long, for me. Keep writing.