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All Comments on 'Hypnotized by the Pool?! Pt. 03'

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Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor7 months ago

I love the story so far, but you could really use good proof-reading or an editor. Additionally, this chapter was unusually short.

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Aspiring fantasy author with too much time on their hands.