All Comments on 'Hypnotrack Ch. 06: The Video'

Man, this was great and awful at the same time. I really like this story so seeing that is not dead is great... but after 5 months coming to a pure lore chapter was painful :D.

Great chapter anyways, Verensei.

Heh. This is why I submitted it with the next chapter, which is, a.. well, The start of the party.

And i'm about half done on the next chapter - which is the REST of that party. Well, that night. it's already at 4K words...

and consider how the girls are feeling when they arrive at his apartment, given what he's told them to wear, and to expect and prepare for. ;)

so you'll get your kinky fix in a few days, I suspect.

And hopefully the one after about a week later, i'd guesstimate?

Awesome! Can't wait for the next installment. Really enjoying your story, please keep writing!

Love it so far, keep it going. Does he free his slaves and if he does will there be repercussions.

Fantastic series. The sex scenes are powerful, well-paced, and detailed enough to engage the mind in the right way. The surprise of a nefarious, so far anonymous actor is a great surprise which adds drama and a whole lot of story telling potential to the series. Great job.

ogniste panie, ogniste