All Comments on 'Hypnotrack Ch. 08: Cleaning Time'

Another awesome installment! The story is developing at a really nice and the reader is left wanting more! Again, just the odd tpyo but I can't wait for the next one! Thanks for writing this story!

Another great chapter. Very impressive, and it's developing at a good pace.

Wow, this has been an amazing series so far. Not only are the scenes hot as hell, but your detail regarding the way mind-control/hypnosis works is really immersive! I'm also incredibly excited to see how this ominous threat to our hero & his harem plays out! Amazing work!

I hope you’re going to continue this compelling series. Great action and characters make me glad to have found it.

A brief update: I'm having a bit of trouble with the next chapter - but the chapter that comes after it is nearly done? So bear with me, por favor. not finished with this!