by August74
I loved reading the story and imagining myself in the slave's position I would happily submit and be a willing slave I hope you write more chapters soon x sissy Lucy
Jack and Jack's master went up the hill and Jack got whipped. Sorry, this story was very simple and not very exciting nor interesting. It didn't make any waves or give any new ideas of activity and the slave himself was boring and bored. It had no emotion and we got nothing of the involvement of these people.
it is a good start but needs additional chapters in order to provide more depth and excitement.
I'd gladly be an eager and willing slave to a dominant Master. I would be proud to serve and service Sir and his friends, 24 hours a day, 7 days a week.
I like your story. It's a little straight ahead but well written.
I also like the idea of white slavery where white sex slaves are kept, traded and transported like livestock. The slave is to be obedient strict to the word and gets immediately punished if not.
I Would like to discuss more aspects of white slavery.