All Comments on 'I am Timothy: your... Ch. 06'

by Dannie81

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OverconfidentSarcasmOverconfidentSarcasmabout 1 year ago

Yeah, sorry, that's all bullshit and I'm out.

You adding all those lines about how the woman knows exactly when to stop, how caring she is, and how much compassion she shows towards her son, are clearly a reaction to people pointing out your screw-ups in the last chapter. There is still nothing supporting those claims in ANY way.

I mean, seriously... in the last chapter, she screwed up so badly by not recognizing his signals and then straight up ignoring his safe word, he had a panic attack and ran. So, now she straight up tells him that there will no longer BE a safe word when she places a vibrator to needles she stuck into his chest?

1/5. No idea how this got through the approval process.

pamelacdnzpamelacdnz11 months ago

This story is in severe need of a good editor, Gramatical errors, incoherant words and missing words. I suspect perhaps a spell checker has been used and that is always a disaster as it ahs no idea what the fuck you are writing about.

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