by Cobaltofdark
Thia, Is not a Mistress but a Dominatrix and a cruel psycho bitch. And in real life Karma is a real bitch of a pay back. At some point evil cannot exist and someone will rise up and bring Thia and her cunt mother down. Frankly taking her to Asia and giving her to a low class Brothel where she would fucked 50 to 60 times a day by all comers and special shows in breeding pens with Alpha stud aminals who will claim her has their bitch will be to good for this low life piece of garbage
Wow Anonymous, I can definitely say Alathia doesn't like being called Thia. And she loves Bex she genuinely cares and feels in her way she's showing her. Everything Thia does is to make Bex better in her mind is it fucked up sure but she doesn't see it that way.
Yeah enjoyed parts 1, 2 and 3, 4 was a little unsure of, but this just went stupid crazy and lost all interest in every possible sense, no more realism to any extent just straight out the window. The series had a lot of potential but I'm unsure how even to type out an opinion on it, I guess 1/5 works best. Almost like the author had a good thing going and also lost their brain writing so just decided "fuck it, this and this and that"
Well I hate to disappoint so I out it here I've the party planned next or I can do another day of training and make it more play between family 1 or 2 in comments 1 for party 2 for family story next.
I am refreshing this page a few times a day waiting for the next installment!!!! Hope we don't have to wait long but definitely worth waiting for! Such a brilliant story!!!! I hope for Party next but I may just be impatient!
Totally agree with the comment below!!!! Keep checking to see if it is out yet!!! When will you grace us with the next chapter?
Well it's on the schedule but next coming out is the first installment of the Bimbo Tails of Daisy DuWell! And then I'll be working on next chapter of how I'm still on fence between fam story or go to the party so bare with me lol
Just wanted to say that I’ve enjoyed the story so far! Bex slowly starting to subconsciously acknowledge Alathia as her mistress in her head is honestly the hottest part of the whole story. I look forward to reading the next chapter!
I've l9ved the story so far. I would like to hear more about what bex new clothing is going be after all her old stuff got thrown out. Also looking forward to hearing about the party. I did find it odd when bex got peirced. Her ears and bellybutton weren't done as well as to me they scream femininity which would especially as bex saw herself as a tomboy.
Tinkerbelle that's a very valid point in my mind Bex has her ears pierced but no belly button but that may be remedied. I'll make sure to go into detail while prepping for party on Bex's new wardrobe
Please do the party next!!! Is there any update on when the next chapter will come out now that Bimbo Tales of Daisy DuWell has been published? Love that story too!
Such an amazing story so far!!! How long before the next chapter? The wait is killing me!
Good news bad news, I'm almost done with ch 6 of I became it isnt the party but some new subplots are introduced so I'll stop slacking and finish up 6 to get it to the editor. It's like 80 percent at this point lol.
Might it be online for the weekend Colboltofdark? Literally will plan my weekend around reading it if it is!
Unfortunately no but I am at 90 percent now and just have to finish the scene and run a quick first draft reading and then off to editor
When is the next chapter going to land Cobaltofdark (cool name). The suspense is killing me. I am refreshing your page constantly!!!!
It's with the editor it's done so probably a couple days. I promise as soon as I have it back I'll upload it