All Comments on 'I Couldn't Stop It'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

How the fuck does a cock enter her while she's on her man's shoulders? Makes no sense. I'd have zero stars if I could. Take it back to the lab and revamp it, it needs work.

poisonjamespoisonjames4 months ago

The story is fun, and I think has a good pace. The idea that she's held up on her boyfriend's back while being screwed is tough to follow. Is he 5'2, or is an NBA player behind her?

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Agreed with above comments. This is physically impossible, but nicely written otherwise.

Robincd1126Robincd11264 months ago

Great story! It must be something with Mardi Gras! Lol! I had a very similar experience in that crowded street, just last year.

DEGEDEGE4 months ago

Nice story. Huge drives for my kinks. Just recommend you to do a couple of proofing reads to analyze if there isn't something that got out of control just because of being hot while writing (happened to me sometimes)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I’m going this year! I hope this happens to me. I love random touches from strangers. Good thing my boyfriend is just as oblivious as this guy.

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