All Comments on 'I Lied Pt. 03'

Why would he be so stupid to trust Brad? From what I have read in this chapter I think I know how this is going to play out & I’m not liking it! Makes me wish I never started reading this series! 😩

I hope he isnt lying anymore. I dont want to see him hurt her.

Can't tell who is talking to who in a few places, sudden scene changes with no warning? Too tiresome to attempt to reconstruct what you intended to write this time.

I hope your not setting siblings up for a bad heart ache with this trusting brad..

Im gonna continue to read on in hopes the end result will make story worth it.

Again i say if brad ends up with beth the story fails on so many levels that a dick beats out sibling love.

Keep it coming. I gave 5 stars only cause i enjoy some tension and controversy in stories i think your taking us downbthebroad they have to fight to be together and tha ok as long as they get there.

Excellent story of brother sister love. What makes it special is the back story of the band. I hope you have time for more chapters without getting crazy like some authors do. Thanks for taking the time to write and share!!

I will not jump to conclusions as it's not fair to the writer, but I really hope that Brad and Beth don't end up together forever. I find myself hating him and wishing unjust things for him, I don't like him at all he's a sneaky asshole. Five stars from me, you're a great story teller. PS Fuck Brad!

I love this story so far. I really hope Brad finds his way out of the story somehow, this is a great story of love between two siblings, and I am looking forward to reading more from you.

I'm late for work because I got so wrapped up in your story that I couldn't put it down. I hope that you're happy. 😆 🤣 😂 😊

5/5 great story. Hoping for a romantic happy ending for the sibling lovers.

I don't normally give 5 stars as rule but this story is so very good it truly deserved it

It is hot and well thought through, brings back memories...

Great stuff

5/5

The way things are going with these two, it would be downright cruel if they don't stay with each other and get their happily ever after. I truly hope it's not just some setup and she ends up with that dick Brad or something. It would be a total fuck you to the reader and completely ruin the story. I'll hold out hope that the author didn't fuck us over :)