All Comments on 'I Love You Ch. 02'

I absolutely LOVED this chapter, and the whole story, please write more soon!

take too much time to write the next chapter!!!! I hope you write more soon! I absolutely love your stories!

Damn this couple is fucked up. The funny thing is i think they would be good parents. I also think if she runs without telling him about the baby, he will be pissed.

I knew these two had issues, but I never imagined anything like this. Fantastic follow-up. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for continuing this story. I'm so glad she's pregnant.

Powerful chapter....more updates please. I'm curious to see what he will do.

everything you write leave me breathless, including this story. keep up the amazing work!

Bianca and Jezebel pregnant? The Stone family is going to have many grandkids running around. Will Bianca and Jezebel meet up or are these two stories happening at different times? Thanks for the update. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh so good! Really amazing...Please continue!!!

OMG seriously you reallly neeed to continue ASAP!

I LOVED this story... the first chapter.. and when I saw you wrote a chapter 2 I went insane!!! I LOVE these stories... PLEASE write more...PLEAS PLEASE PLEASE with a cherry ontop! :) lol. These stories are effing amazing!

Love it! Love it! LOVE IT!

Its been months and youre just leaving us hanging. not cool. We need to know wats going to happen next. im not usually into the whole Dark love kind of stories but i love all of your work *what can i say* so plz continue!

This is such an amazing story... post more chapters or at least give us an ending. Unfinished stories suck so pleasee write more

Oh please update again, u cant torture ppl like this. This is a great story, i don't want to say it. but even better than enemy. please update again.

update, update, update!

Amazing! Please continue this story. It is just amazing! Jake and Jezebel--wow! Wow!

Would ya finish this please!?!!!

Frig!

lol.. Its like torture!

I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY AND I WOULD REALLY FUCKIN WISH IS THE NICESTWAY POSSIBLE THAT YOU SEND ANOTHER CHAPTER FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!!!!I'VE BEEN WAITIN FOR EVER NOW.....GOSH

Amazing! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!

Please finish the story, its my favorite, your torturing us, the story was HOT

I love this fic of yours!! I love these two characters! Your writing is fantastic because it keeps up the base of action as well as emotion. Your plot, characters, plot development and writing really draws the reader in. I really hope you plan on continuing with this story! Anyways, I've read this story like 10 times already and it always gets me a little bit more drawn in. Awesome job~ Hope to read more from you~

I know you've been finishing the others, so I wait patiently..U have to keep going for this one! It's HOT as hell!

wow...That was intense in fact I couldn't decide if I could keeping reading. I LOVE YOU STORIES. I am glad I did

grief seems to find them both. They need to see someone and maybe this will help them to love themselves and each other wholehearted. I hope that she keeps the baby :>)

The grammar fiend inside of me is itching to get her hands on this to fix the grammar/spelling/improper word usage issues. Other than that, I really like it.

@ lisaisalefty- Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

P.S.- I think everyone's inner grammar-fiend goes a little crazy when reading this story, lol.

Urz,

Z (RW)

Clearly this series is based off that book. No shade though. It's still he great. I can see the differences. Besides no one said you couldn't be inspired. Excellent take though.

Loved it keep up the great work. Fifty shades is pg-13 compared to this work. Thanks for sharing

How could this possibly be based on fifty shades when this was first submitted in 2008??! THINK next time, you idiot!!