All Comments on 'I Picked Up Karoline at the Airport'

This could have been a wonderful story.

Why are you in such a hurry? Is your “writing time” limited to only an hour per story?

This was an outstanding concept ruined by your rush to cum.

Not only was it rushed, the premise is so far beyond reality it should have been in the sci-fi category. You can't slip two fingers into a pussy in a crowd and no one notice. Besides, what woman would allow that? I stopped at that point.

Rushed, lacking descriptive content.

So, you THINK that RANDOM CAPITALIZATION is a good THING? If so, why? And like he said, no story no plot, just a few words, leading nowhere productive.

Bad misleading tagline.

The only "teacher" part of this story is a couple sentences of background description, completely superfluous.

She's already a slut from the moment we meet her.