by WFEATHER
You have yet again managed to mesmerize me with your powerful words and allow me to block out all distractions in this loud room as I read your work.
This was a very powerful piece. I don't really get into breath play, but the part about something being around the woman's neck in this got to me more than any other part and I have no idea why.
Wow. Please keep writing. You are quite amazing. I admit that I have a slight crush on your work. I hope that you don't mind too much.
Bravo, Maestro!