All Comments on 'I Want it Everywhere'

The crisp, rapid fire structure conveys perfectly the intense sex — your intention achieved. Love the list of “where” next and the almost poignant closing lines. FWIW: Get that she is his passionate, submissive lover but why the “master” element — does not enhance the moment/scene; let it simply be an erotically charged liaison with married man. Like your poetry as well.

Intensely erotic….

Great, quick hot story. During a deep low in my marriage (20 years in) I had my first NSA hotel sex with a younger man I met at conference. Two years later, a different man became my "same time next year lover" at the same conference.