All Comments on 'I "Went Black" Pt. 03 - Finale'

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer11 months ago

HOLY FUCK, THAT WAS HOT!!! I have a balcony that's hardly ever used, if the three of you would care to do a repeat performance. ;-)

tchina85tchina8511 months agoAuthor

Maybe I should do a Pt 4....I myself liked this one the most. Stay tuned, and thank you!

xzay24xzay2411 months ago

One of my new favorite stories. I need a big daddy bear in me now.

geemeedeegeemeedee11 months ago

His poor neighbors, lol. I definitely feel there should be a part 4! Hot chapter, really like the sexting, but the weird verb tense kept taking me out of the story. I suggest an edit to clean them up — Carlos’s mustache tickling his top lip is where the verb tense starts up be correct for the rest of the story.

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