All Comments on 'I Wonder'

story of a first time love. I enjoyed the way you explained each move and how you felt. Continue with another chapter if you will. I feel this story can be added to very easily.

Hi Flutter,

A warm loving treatment of an old theme that we should all hope never grows old. My dear, I'm liking your stories more and more.

Warm regards,

duddle

Loved it.

It seemed so natural. The sort of way it was for me in my youth.

Would have been a smash hit though if there was a bit more detail and told in the first person.

Kee it up