by flutterbyspirit
Loved it.
It seemed so natural. The sort of way it was for me in my youth.
Would have been a smash hit though if there was a bit more detail and told in the first person.
Kee it up
Hi Flutter,
A warm loving treatment of an old theme that we should all hope never grows old. My dear, I'm liking your stories more and more.
Warm regards,
duddle
story of a first time love. I enjoyed the way you explained each move and how you felt. Continue with another chapter if you will. I feel this story can be added to very easily.