by rose362436
What a great read. FWIW...I think breaking is the way to go with these pony girls just like any thoroughbred, plough, or war horse. Can't wait to see Gabby deal with the breaking...or taming...keep up the good work.
Taming is the way to go. Broken women stories are not very interesting.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
I like this story because both Gabby and Ari are on a mission and Gabby is role-playing a ponygirl to fulfill the mission. Both are strong independent women and are not brainless bimbos!
Keep on writing :-)
Love this story! Think you should include the goblin tag. As for taming and breaking, i agree with Gir as taming is best for long term loyalty. However, i think it depends on the filly as more willing ponies (those turned on by the idea) should be tamed, but the aggressive ones should be broken in quick. But i guess those who want it wouldn't mind being broken in? When that happens the goblin should ask the pony what techniques they should use, imagine how humiliating it would be to know you're getting turned into livestock with whichever method you chose for yourself.
I like the Princess Bride style interludes of conversation between Ari and Gabby in between the narrative. Taming is the way to go as someone below said, broken women don't make good stories.
I’m enjoying the story, it’s quite original and unique, thank you! I think story-wise breaking is more interesting but like others said a broken character isn’t very interesting. And I agree with the taming goblin, a broken human is probably less productive and useful. A goblin would want his steed to be quick thinking and alert.
Tanuki - I feel so privileged that you liked the story. It means a lot, coming from you.
For all those who have expressed their opinions about taming vs breaking - I want to thank you. I am going to explore both in the story and attempt to contrast them
As a Dominant I delight in both hard and soft Ds, a wise Dominant of either sex learns both sets of techniques, most submissives respond best to a blend tilted one way or the other, some will only respond to one or the other.
In their choice of reading most us us read and fantasise "harder" than we play.
Have to agree with others that at least some elements of taming make for more interesting and flexible characters.
@EddieTheBastard that's interesting. Your opinion comes from real experience. I value that. My is pure fantasy. So you can help me if I get something wrong.
I hope you are enjoying the story.
Breaking vs taming …. Depends on the dom character first and the outcome this character has in mind …. A pony or better a male pony needs to broken by force, yes, like for example a sissy faggot too, to really break the male EGO completely and importantly if this faggot is designed to be property and being signed with owner insignia …. A pony girl is , speaking for most of them and including the peaceful female nature, more attractive and productive then tamed …. Working with horses i think is a great way to discover similarities, a stallion is just hard work and needs power play all time while a mare is willing to follow along just offering some treats …. So the goblins would have to decide what character is to be turned into a pony what work this pony is designed to and then taming or breaking …. But 90 or more like 95 % i would tendentious say taming …. May your goblins should start with male ponys and breaking them for Hard Labour
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