All Comments on 'Ice Melts, When It's Hot Ch. 05'

Well at least Max knows Willow likes him. But he really is a dunce about omegas and what they need.

Ohh man! Stops at the good part, so excited for more! Thanks for uploading, love your story ❤️

Take your time! Love your stories as always.

Great story, painful chapter. Max expects too much from him. Willow is so ignorant about everything and would need strong leadership and good communication. Yet Max feels very insecure himself. I hope that Max comes into his own and Willow remains his snappy self :-)

Don't worry about posting fast. We're grateful for your great writing and heartful stories at your own pace. Much love

I love the ending. Bring on the loving. I need them to connect more after this chapter please. Patiently waiting …..

“I wanted him to hurt me, just for him to kiss it better.” Pretty well sums up young Willow. Worst parents ever!

Oh they are. They are so fuckign cute ohm y god. I can’t even like. Convey how absolutely adorable they are. He’s just!!!!!!! He’s baby!!!!!! Even with all of the pretty damn heavy emotions in this chapter, it feels so tender and sweet. They’re making…. some progress! Also have I mentioned that I love Willow? Bc I love willow he’s so cute and little and angry and is. a little baby. Love himb.

So one thing I am worried about is that Max may not be Willow’s cherry popper. It becomes author’s M.O. that all initial sex of the bottoms is not with the tops.