by Ickenboffer
I hope happy ending between younger couple and older couple.
it all added up to a great story. Will we see these two couples again? I hope so, and soon
Please can you continue this story? Im so hooked and would love a chapter with the older couple to reafferm their love and brag about their sucsess and even a few chapters about the younger couple finding themselves and each other!
OH by the way LOVE the cream pie!!
I'm sad to see there was no follow up with the story. Good sequence and decent writing. Liked it a lot. You averaged 4.5 stars with me.