by Ickenboffer
I'm sad to see there was no follow up with the story. Good sequence and decent writing. Liked it a lot. You averaged 4.5 stars with me.
Please can you continue this story? Im so hooked and would love a chapter with the older couple to reafferm their love and brag about their sucsess and even a few chapters about the younger couple finding themselves and each other!
OH by the way LOVE the cream pie!!
it all added up to a great story. Will we see these two couples again? I hope so, and soon
I hope happy ending between younger couple and older couple.