All Comments on 'I'll Be Watching You'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Subtlety

This kind of story can be written more elegantly with the strong theme of non consent. Why does the female have to be punched when she has already been bound, gagged and drugged? Such a turn off to think about the mind of the rapist. Yuck.

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