All Comments on 'I'm into You Ch. 06'

How to make this better Part 2

😂🤣😂😂 This Chapter!😂🤣😂🤣How can you have him begging for a chance and a date, then taking her to his grandad‘s cabin to screw her? I thought we were going on a date? 😂🤣😂🤣Plus another tripping incident?! For real? And then one minute he‘s insulting her and the next he‘s face first in her quim? 😂🤣😂🤣You‘re gonna make me draw up a BS Bingo chart for reading the next chapter.

All the side characters are more interesting at this point… but we aren’t here to read about Aidan and Darius.

Just decide: if it‘s insta love, she shouldn’t question him.

If it‘s dark bully, then have him bully her.

If it‘s enemies to lovers … please. Just go on goodreads, type in the category they are all there.

You have to give him a backstory that’s believable as to why he likes rough sex. She likes it too, she thinks (plus points for getting her to admit that to herself)… but she got fingered by someone else in the library? For real or did she make that up to yank his chain? See, I have no clue with this girl, because it came sooo out of left field, especially since you said in chapter one that nobody was checking for her. So 🤷🏾‍♀️

Believe me, it’s not about her being Black. Let her be a heroine we can root for. BW deserve love too. But she does make a very valid point, he has given her no reason to want to be with him. So I was happy she finally turned on her brain. But the hero has to develop some in this story.

He is rich, good- looking and clever. He tricks her into tutoring him to get to talk to her but he doesn’t. He pretty much orchestrates sexual encounters EVERY single time. Then he gets jealous of her friends but still doesn’t talk to her. He’s acting and speaking as if in his head he‘s with her, but still 🤐… does he at least have a therapist?😂🤣😂🤣 What part of his character is changing?

If you don't like my boy, that is fine. If this isn't for You, that's fine... Also, when you put it, that's Way he. I can see why you think he orchestrated everything and may need a therapist. But unfortunately, as I said, if you don't like my dude, you do not have to read about him and his fucked Up love lif

We need the next chapter!!!!!

It’s been so long. Next chapter please

Ignore the haters 😌. Hopefully we get a new chapter

Can't wait for Chapter 6!

Chapter 6!!!

I really like this and hoped this get update soon

I like it ☺️ ignore the haters hopefully you you can update this chapter

Looking for an editor do you know who could help? I love your stories